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7．假如你是李华，准备参加你市举办的英语演讲大赛，已写好演讲稿．请给你校的外教Miss Dyson写一封信，请她帮你改稿．
要求：词数100左右．
Dear Miss Dyson，
I am writing to ask for some help．I am going to take part in an English speech contest to be held in my city next month．I have finished writing my speech，but I am not very confident about，it．Are all the sentences in my speech grammatically correct？Are my ideas worth listening to？Will the judges and listeners laugh at me because of my poor language？Therefore，I wonder if you could spare some time to polish it，for which I would be truly grateful．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
高分句型一：
 I am going to take part in an English speech contest to be held in my city next month．I have finished writing my speech，but I am not very confident aboutit
要参加一个英语演讲比赛将于下个月在我市举行．我写完了我的演讲，但是我不是很自信．
高分句型二：
Therefore，I wonder if you could spare some time to polish it，for which I would be truly grateful．
因此，我想知道您是否能抽出一些时间来润色一下，我会非常感谢您的．

解答 Dear Miss Dyson，
I am writing to ask for some help．I am going to take part in an English speech contest to be held in my city next month．I have finished writing my speech，but I am not very confident aboutit（高分句型一）．Are all the sentences in my speech grammatically correct？Are my ideas worth listening to？Will the judges and listeners laugh at me because of my poor language？Therefore，I wonder if you could spare some time to polish it，for which I would be truly grateful（高分句型二）．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．

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以下内容，给他回复邮件．
推荐网站：www．edchinese．com
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2．有在线教师答疑解惑．
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3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Edward，
I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese．I'd like to recommend www．edchinese．com to you．
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I hope you will find this website interesting and helpful．（高分句型）I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．
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