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【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

My favorite proverb is “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” It mean that true friends always come to you when you’re in trouble. Last term, my father met with a traffic accident, but his right leg got injured seriously. Consequently, he received the operation and I had to look after him in the hospital. Learned about this, Li Lei was offered to take care of my father without hesitation. He also helped me make up for my missing lessons. Thank to his help and inspiration, I went through the difficulty period and regained confidence. However, a true friend always spares no effort help you when you are in trouble. We all should try to make so good friends.

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【解析】1.这条谚语的意思是“真正的朋友总是在你有困难的时候来到你身边”。根据句意可知用一般现在时态，it是主语，故把mean---means。

2.上学期，我父亲遇到了一起交通事故，他的右腿严重受伤。根据句意可知此处是递进关系而不是转折关系，故把but---and。

3.结果，他做了一次手术。故把the---an。

4.李磊知道这事后，他毫不犹豫来照顾我父亲。Learn和句子主语是主动关系，用现在分词做时间状语，故把Learned---Learning。

5.李磊提供照顾我父亲。是主动关系，故把was去掉。

6.多亏了他的帮助和鼓励。Thanks to多亏了---，故把Thank---Thanks。

7.困难的时期。形容词修饰名词，故把difficulty---difficult。

8.多亏了他的帮助和鼓励，我度过了困难时期，再次获得了自信。因此，当你处于困境的时候，真正的朋友会不惜一切地帮助你。此处是因果关系，故把However---Therefore。

9.固定搭配：spare no efforts to do sth.不惜一切做某事，故在help前加to。

10.我们都应该尽力做这样的朋友。such+形容词+名词，故把so---such。