Question

6．假如你是李华，在最近的研究性学习当中，受《21 世纪中学生英语报》（The 21st Century）之邀，你对你所在的班 60 名同学进行了你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果．请你用 英语给 English Weekly 写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法或建议．

注意：
1、报道应包括图表所示全部内容，可适度发挥．
2、就至少两个数据发表观点和建议．
3、词数：100 左右．
4、首句已给出，不计入总词数．
A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time．
A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time．From the pie chat，we can see 53% of the students like sports，so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school．The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet，with 36% of the students interested in it．Only a few students，accounting for 8 percent of them，take reading as a hobby．And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments．
From my point of view，our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students．Besides，guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet．

Yours，Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet，with 36% of the students interested in it．第二大受学生欢迎的活动是上网，36%的学生对它感兴趣．
with 36% of the students interested in it属于with的复合结构做状语，相当于独立主格结构，其中interested in it 为过去分词做宾语补足语．
句型二：
Only a few students，accounting for 8 percent of them，take reading as a hobby．只有大约8%的学生把阅读作为兴趣．
account for 占据（比例），解释/说明（原因）；accounting for 8percent of them 为现在分词做定语．
句型三：
 From my point of view（1），our school should have more sports facilities built（2）to satisfy the need of the students．依照我的观点，我们学校应该建造更多的运动设备满足学生的需要．
（1）from one's point of view依照某人的观点
（2）have more sports facilities built建造更多的运动设备；该短语运用了句型have sth．done（请别人做…），其中built 为过去分词做宾语补足语．

解答 A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time．From the pie chat，we can see 53% of the students like sports，so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school．The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet，with 36% of the students interested in it【高分句型一】．Only a few students，accounting for 8 percent of them，take reading as a hobby【高分句型二】．And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments（图表内容描述）．
    From my point of view，our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students【高分句型三】．Besides，guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet（观点和建议）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，根据题目的要求审要点，要点要包括文字中的要点，也要包括图片或表格中的主要信息．其次要考虑词语和句型的选用，词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．