Question

【题目】书面表达

近些年来，随着人们生活水平的日益改善，饲养宠物的人们的数量与日俱增。饲养宠物给人们带来快乐的同时，也随之带来了一些问题。主要有：（一）、宠物发出的噪音非常扰民；（二）、动物的粪便会污染环境；（三）、当主人带着宠物去公共场所时，有些宠物会吓着孩子甚至咬人；（四）、 某些宠物会传播疾病，已经引起了人们的广泛关注。

假如你是李华，请你就上面提到的人们饲养宠物带了的问题给报社编辑写一封信，寻求帮助， 并期待媒体能够就解决该问题做一些事情。

注意：

1. 字数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but ______________________________________

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reasons.

First of all, as it is known to people, pets make much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文要求写一封信给报社编辑，内容包括两方面：陈述宠物给我们生活带来的麻烦以及寻求媒体的帮助。写作时注意以下几点：1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时，以第一人称为主。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。：

【亮点说明】

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如take sth into consideration 考虑到；as it is known to people 众所周知；that引导的定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句；it is widely accepted that人们普遍认为；The most important is that最重要的是后接表语从句；还有First of all，What’s more等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。