Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华。 你的美国朋友Carl正在你市度假，请你代表学生会给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他给同学们做报告。邮件内容如下：

1. 时间；下周三下午3点到5点；

2. 报告内容：如何提高英语口语，美国中学生的业余生活以及中美文化差异。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Carl,

I’m glad to hear that you’re enjoying your holiday in my city.

_________________________________________________________________ Waiting for your early reply.

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Carl,

I'm glad to hear that you’ re enjoying your holiday in my city. On behalf of the Student Union in my school,I invite you to give us a talk from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m. next Wednesday.

Please give us some advice on how to learn English,especially oral English in a more effective way. We’re also very interested in what American students do in their daily lives. In addition,you can talk about some differences between China and America from your experiences.

Is the time convenient for you? If not,can you suggest another time? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是学生会主席李华。 你的美国朋友Carl正在你市度假，请你代表学生会给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他给同学们做报告。邮件内容如下：1. 时间；下周三下午3点到5点；2. 报告内容：如何提高英语口语，美国中学生的业余生活以及中美文化差异。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英文电子邮件。采用三段式，文章结构严谨，层次分明，使用高级句子。I'm glad to hear that you’ re enjoying your holiday in my city.宾语从句用在句中；Please give us some advice on how to learn English,especially oral English in a more effective way.疑问词家动词不定式巧妙运用；We’re also very interested in what American students do in their daily lives.介词in后面的宾语从句堪称经典；Is the time convenient for you?文具的出现很到位；If not,can you suggest another time?省略句完美至极。