Question

4．下表是学校英语网站的新增部分栏目，网站负责人Mr．Black就此向同学们征询意见．

Today's World

Travel

Celebrity Story

Sports and Health

假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语给Mr．Black写E-mail，主要内容包括：
1．最喜欢的栏目及理由；
2．你建议还需增加的栏目及理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：栏目-column．
Dear Mr．Black，
I am glad that there will be some new columns in our English website．____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇为提纲类写作．题目要求写出你最喜欢的英语网站的新增栏目，以及建议增加的栏目．栏目有，今日世界，旅行观光，名人故事，运动健康．考生可以选择自己最有话可写的方面入手，保证内容的丰富性．本篇文章需要分两段，一段写最喜欢的栏目及理由、还有一段写自己的意见或建议．还需要选择恰当的连接词，使文章更连贯．
重要短语：
have higher expectation to、turn deaf ear to、the latest science and technology、would appreciate it if等等，使得文章语言更加连贯，意思更明确．此外，文章还运用了多种句式和结构，比如
高分句子：
1．From the new column Today's World we can learn what's going on around the world．本句是宾语从句，what's going on around the world作宾语．
2．I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website．本句含有重要句型  I would appreciate it if…，如果…我将不胜感激．

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
      How are you doing？
      I'm glad that there will be some new columns in our English website．Of the four columns，I have higher expectation to Today's World．As you know，today's world is a changing world．We'll become outdated if we turn deaf ear to it．From the new column Today's World we can learn what's going on around the world．（高分句型）It can also enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology．（介绍我最喜欢的栏目以及原因）
      As to suggestion，I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website．（高分句型）Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well，but short of learning chances after class．I hope our website can do something about it．（提出建议增加的栏目）
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．