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19.假定你是李明.请根据写作要点用英语写一篇文章,记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历.
写作要点:
1.做家务的理由;          2.做家务的过程;          3.你的感受.
注意:
1.不少于100词; 2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;  3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.
I am an 18-year-old middle school student.___________________________________

分析 考查提纲类作文写作,重点考查考生的书面表达的能力.做家务的话题应该是中学生熟悉,有话可写的素材,因此难度并不大.题目以周记的形式展现,要求考生先介绍做家务的理由,再介绍做家务的过程,最后写出自己的感受.考生在写作时,一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作,三个要点都十分重要,如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上,抓住语言的准确性,再写出几个亮点词汇和句式,得到高分应该比较轻松.
【亮点说明】Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.这句话是现在分词做状语,Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?这句话用了同位语从句,I collected all the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.这句话里面用了词组:put sth in place把…布置得井井有条,Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.这句话用了倒装句,还有文章用了Firstly,After that这样的词使文章更加连贯.
Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.(高分句型一)
Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?(高分句型二)
Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.(高分句型三)

解答 I am an 18-year old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.(高分句型一)
  Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?(高分句型二)Firstly I collected all the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the floors.
  At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.(高分句型三)

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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