Question

16．假设你叫李华，你校高二同学正在开展一场讨论，主题是：高中学生要不要参加体育锻炼．请根据下面所提供的信息，给英文报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况．
55%的同学认为：
应该每天进行体育锻炼；
做早操，打乒乓球、打篮球，但不要时间过长；
锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病；
锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好．
45% 的同学认为：
锻炼浪费时间；
锻炼容易使人疲劳；
锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能投入学习；
锻炼中途可能会受伤．
[写作要求]1．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
2．表达清晰．
3．词数100左右．
4．开头结尾已写出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：build their body and reduce lot of diseases．增强体质，减少疾病；
a waste of time and tiring               浪费时间，使人疲劳
be hurt  受伤

Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we've had about whether students should take physical exercise．
                                                           
Yours  sincerely，
Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息进入高三以后，很多学校都取消了体育锻炼．对此情况，有人赞同有人反对．关于这一话题，你们在班上进行了激烈的讨论，大家发表了不同的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从正反观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take exercise做锻炼；build up our body强身健体；Besides另外；However然而；a waste of time浪费时间；In addition另外；Personally就个人而言；keep fit保持健康；
55% of the  students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）
They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）
In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we've had about whether students should take physical exercise．
      55% of the students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）Besides，it makes us completely relaxed after long-time study in classroom．
      However，the other students are against taking regular exercise．They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）
       Personally，we need to take physical exercise on a regular basis to keep fit because nothing is more important than good health．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours  sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li  Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．