Question

11．目前，不少人在写作文或交流时喜欢使用网络语言．就此现象，你班最近举行了一场讨论．请根据下表的提示，客观地介绍讨论的情况及你的观点．

40%的同学认为	60%的同学认为	你的观点
1．有点荒诞，有时让人无法理解； 2．违背了汉语的语法规则，对学习毫无帮助．	1．幽默，使语言更生动； 2．有助于表达思想．	1．…  2．…

注意：1．对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2．词数120左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数；    3．参考词汇：荒诞的 ridiculous
With the development of the Internet，there has come a kind of language called Web Language．Recently，our class has held a discussion on whether it's good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication．
                                              

Answer 1

分析 本题要求考生综述讨论情况、双方观点并阐明自己的观点．全文应使用现在时态．注意阐明自己观点的部分不要与前文双方观点重复．虽然不可逐条翻译，但是不要遗漏要点，否则影响得分．注意词汇等表达手段的多样化、避免句式单一．行文要连贯．用自己熟悉的语言，不要生编硬造，避免中式英语．
本文完成了题目规定的任务，要点齐全、层次清楚、行文连贯．用词不落俗套．如用not in favor of而不是多数考生会用的against表示"反对"，用fond of代替for．在表达自己观点的时候更是直截了当：I don't think it good to use Web Language．体现了表达的多样性．
亮点句型一：40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language，thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life．40%的学生不赞成使用网络语言，认为在日常生活中不常看到或听到的单词是荒谬的．这是一个复杂句，其中thinking it…in our daily life是主句的伴随状语，在这个状语中 which are not commonly used in our daily life引导的是定语从句修饰先行词words．
亮点句型二：They think what they say will sound humorous，which makes the language more lively．他们认为他们说的话听起来幽默，这使得语言更加生动．这是一个有主语从句和定语从句的句子．what they say will sound humorous是think的宾语从句，在这个宾语从句中what they say是主语从句；which makes the language more lively是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子的内容．

解答 With the development of the Internet，there has come a kind of language called Web Language．Recently，our class has held a discussion on whether it's good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication．【阐明现象】
40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language，thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life（亮点句型一）．Worse still，it's hard for them to make themselves understood．In their opinion，it is against Chinese grammar，and it's not beneficial to students'studies．
However，the rest of the students are fond of it．They think what they say will sound humorous，which makes the language more lively．Moreover，it is of special help for them to express themselves freely．【阐述同学们的观点】
In my opinion，it is a phenomenon worth thinking about．I don't think it good to use Web Language．It may be fashionable as some think，but you may also make your idea confusing，leaving other people at a loss．（亮点句型二）【个人观点】

点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．