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14．你在网络上读到一篇关于"90后"的英语文章，你打算以"Post 90's Generation"为题，用第一人称给《二十一世纪英文报》写一篇文章，内容包括：
"90后"的缺点 "90后"的优点 你自己的感受 
 1．依赖性强
2．自私
3．贪图过舒适的生活等		1．渴望了解周围的世界； 
2．思想独立；
3．有很多新观念等		 
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1．必须包括表格中的所有内容；
2．为了使文章通顺完整，可以适当增加内容；
3．词数：100-120左右．
We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．
It's true that the post90's generations have some weaknesses．Some of us，for example，rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives．Some are even selfish and care little for others．
At the same time，the post90's generations desire to learn more about the world around us，and we are independent in thinking．We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas．
I think the post90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses，and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation．

分析 本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的．考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是人们对90后的评价，所以要用一般现在时．但本文必须用第一人称．再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次．
文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如full of，rely on，care for，be independentin，keep up with等和It is true that…句型等．还运用了which引导的定语从句，that引导的宾语从句等．并注意了句子的衔接如：at the same time，for example等等．
亮点句型一：We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．我们90后的一代人，生活在一个充满激烈竞争的社会，发展我们的特殊的行为方式和价值观念，这引起了人们的关注．这是一个非限制性定语从句，定语从句which has raised people's concern．中其中关系代词which指代的是整个主句的内容．
亮点句型二：It's true that the post90's generations have some weaknesses．这是真的，后90代有一些弱点．本句中it是形式主语，真正的主语是句子that the post90's generations have some weaknesses．

解答 Post90's Generation
We，post90's generation，are living in a society full of fiercer competition，and developing our special manners and values，which has raised people's concern．（亮点句型一）
It's true that the post90's generations have some weaknesses．（亮点句型二）Some of us，for example，rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives．Some are even selfish and care little for others．【缺点】
At the same time，the post90's generations desire to learn more about the world around us，and we are independent in thinking．We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas．【优点】
I think the post90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses，and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation．【个人观点】

点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．

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