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9.第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
I am luck to have good parents.They gives me enough care and teach me a great deal about what to live my life.Parents can be very important teacher in our life.However,actually,they are always the best teachers for their children.Parents may get too closely to their children.Sometimes they only treat them as"something"of his own.Another problem is that parents may often expecting their children's interests to be similar to their own.If they love the science,they may make their children love science too.But what if their children's true love is art,and car repairing?

分析 作者很幸运有好的父母给予他照顾,教他学习和生活,但作者认为实际生活中,父母很重要但未必都是孩子的好老师.有些父母把孩子当作他们自己的东西,把自己的意愿强加在孩子身上,不顾及孩子自己的爱好和感受,这是不可取的.

解答 I am luck to have good parents.They gives me enough care and teach me a great deal about what to 
       lucky                                          give                                                                      how
live my life.Parents can be very important teacher in our life.However,actually,they are∧always the
                                                                teachers                                                           not
best teachers for their children.Parents may get too closely to their children.Sometimes they only treat
                                                                              close
them as"something"of his own.Another problem is that parents may often expecting their children's 
                                their                                                                          expect
interests to be similar to their own.If they lovethe science,they may make their children love science
                                                                                   
too.But what if their children's true love is art,and car repairing?
                                                                          or
1.luck改为lucky;考查形容词的用法,系动词be后面加形容词构成系表结构.
2.gives改为give;考查动词的用法,主语是they,动词要用原形.
3.what改为how;考查复合句中关系词的用法,这里句意应该是"教我怎样生活",所以用how表方式.
4.teacher改为teachers;考查名词复数,这里意思是父母可以成为我们的老师,所以应该用复数.
5.are后面加not;根据however推测句意发生转折,这里not always表示"并非都…",为不完全否定.
6.closely改为close;get close to是固定搭配,意为"接近,靠近".
7.his改;为their;考查物主代词,此处应和句子主语they保持一致,故用their.
8.expecting改为expect;考查情态动词的用法,情态动词后面跟动词原形,所以用expect.
9.去掉the;考查冠词的用法,science是学科名词,前面不加冠词.
10.and改为or;考查连词的用法,and表并列,or表选择;根据句意"假如他们的孩子喜欢的是艺术或者汽车修理呢"应该用or.

点评 短文改错首先要通读短文,把握中心思想,再结合上下文的语境充分运用基础知识,从句型结构,固定搭配,词的变化等多方面进行分析判断,找出错误加以修改.

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[写作内容]
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①你认为父母是否应该教小孩理财?为什么?
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③结合你小时候关于理财的情况来说明你的观点.
[写作要求]
1)在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯.

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