Question

18．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
Eat your vegetables．Wash your hands．Always say"please"and"thank you"．We are full of advice for our children，but when it comes to money，we often have little to say．As a result，our children may grow up with clean hands and good manners，but without any idea how to manage their money．Here are some basics that will help guide them their entire lives：
Show them the future．If your 13-year-old girl were to save﹩100，put it in the bank at 8% interest and add﹩10 every month，by the time she's 65，she would have﹩98，098!Be careful of credit．Credit cards can help you buy necessary things and build a credit history，but they must be used responsibly，which means paying off your debt in time．Explain to your children that when you buy something using a credit card，you can easily end up paying two or three times what you would have paid if you used cash．
    Teach patience．Suppose your child wants a new bicycle that costs﹩150．Rather than you paying the cash，give him some regular pocket money and explain that by putting aside，say，﹩15each week，he will be able to buy it for himself in only ten weeks．
Provide encouragement．Tell your children the importance of saving．And for every dollar he or she agrees to save and invest rather than spend，you agree to add another dollar to the pot．
[写作内容]
1）以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2）然后以约120个词就"父母教小孩理财"这一话题发表你的看法，内容包括：
①你认为父母是否应该教小孩理财？为什么？
②如果应该，那么在小孩几岁的时候教他们理财？用什么形式理财？如果不应该，那么等到孩子多大时教他们理财？用什么形式理财？
③结合你小时候关于理财的情况来说明你的观点．
[写作要求]
1）在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：point out（指出），be patient（耐心），make purchases（购买），manage money （理财），get in debt（欠债），begin doing （开始做某事），accompany sb（陪伴某人），open an account（开一个账号），ask sb to do（叫某人做某事），pay for（付给），thanks to（多亏了），waste money on（在…浪费钱）．
【高分句型一】
1．①keeping responsible credit and being patient ②when making purchases will help them have a better future．
①此处是两个并列的动名词短语"keeping responsible credit and being patient"作主语，谓语动词用单数．
②此处是时间状语从句中的省略，可以理解为"when we are making purchases"．
【高分句型二】
1．Parents may accompany their children to the bank and help them open an account in which they can save their lucky money．
此处是由"in which"引导的定语从句，先行词为"an account"，从句中不缺少主、宾、表等主要成分，缺少地点状语．
【高分句型三】
3．This can be used to pay for their schooling，which will help them understand the true value of money．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 As the author points out，teaching children to save money，keeping responsible credit and being patient when making purchases will help them have a better future．【高分句型一】（概括）
In my opinion，it is essential for parents to teach children how to manage their money responsibly before they move out of home．Without such knowledge，people will not be able to maximize the quality of their life and may even get in debt．（选择的理由）
I think five to six is an appropriate age to begin teaching children money management skills．Parents may accompany their children to the bank and help them open an account in which they can save their lucky money．【高分句型二】This can be used to pay for their schooling，which will help them understand the true value of money．【高分句型三】（小孩几岁的时候教他们理财？用什么形式理财？）
This is exactly what my parents asked me to do when I was young and thanks to them I don't waste my money on frivolous or unnecessary purchase．（观点）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．