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14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

As far as I can remember，grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones．We rented a home near a lake where I spent good time of my life．I attended to school to learn a variety of course，and went camping overnight in the woods．My dog and I would go fishing in the lake that I mentioned early．During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on the lake．In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that tall at the time．It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed．This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio．There was no rivers or lakes to fish in at a11．

分析 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

解答 As far as I can remember，grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones．
                                    growing
We rented a home near a lake where I spent∧good time of my life．I attended toschool to learn
                                                            a                                  went或去掉to 
a variety of course，and go camping overnight in the woods．My dog and I would go fishing in the
               courses
lake that I mentioned early．During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on
                             earlier                              would
the lake．In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that
                                                   heavy
tall at the time．It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed．
                                                                                                 that
This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio．There was no rivers or
                                                                    totally                                    were
lakes to fish in at all．
1．grow-growing  该句意为"在Ohio成长，留下了很多美好的记忆"，根据英语语法习惯，应该用动名词短语作句子主语；
2．spent后加a  time作"时间"讲时，一般为不可数名词，而作"时光"讲时是可数名词，该处表达意思"一段人生中美好的时光"，故time在这里是可数名词，故其前要用不定冠词a限定；
3．attended-went或去掉attended后to  表达"上学"的固定搭配为go to school或attend school；
4．course-courses  a variety of意为"各种各样的"，后接可数名词复数，故course应用复数形式；
5．early-earlier  作者在上文提到We rented a home near a lake…，所以此处应该理解为"去早些时候我提到过的那个湖泊钓鱼"，故这里应该使用early的比较级形式；
6．will-would  纵观全文，作者是在回忆在Ohio成长的经历，所以全文使用的主时态是过去时，故此处也应用过去将来时，将will改为would；
7．heavily-heavy  该句为"主系表"结构，根据英语语法习惯，应使用形容词而非副词作表语；
8．when-that  该句为强调句，意为"直到16岁的时候我搬到California，生活才有了改变"，根据强调句结构It is/was+…that/who…可知，应用that代替when；
9．total-totally  修饰动词应使用副词，故此处应用totally；
10．was-were  该句为there be结构，主语为rivers or lakes，是复数，故谓语应保持一致用were．

点评 考生在做题时需理清文章的事理，注意词性、语态、时态的转换，分析句子结构．

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13．Winners Club
You choose to be a winner!
     The Winners Club is a bank account Specially designed for teenagers．It has been made to help you better manage your money．The Winners Club is a transaction'account（交易账户）where  you  receive a key-card  so  you can get to your money 24/7-that's 24 hours a day，7 days a week!
     It's a club with impressive features for teenagers：'
     You're no millionaire so we don't expect you to pay large fees．In fact，there are no account keeping or transaction fees!
*Excellent interest rates!
     You want your money to grow．The．Winners Club has a good rate of interest which gets even better if you make at least two deposits（储蓄）without taking them out in a month．
     Teenagers are busy-we get that．You may never need to come to a bank at all．With the Winners Club you can choose to use handy tellers and to bank from home using the phone and the Internet…You can have money directly deposited into your Winners Club account．This could be your pocket money or your pay from your part-time job!
     Along with your regular report，you will receive a F'REE magazine full of good ideas to make even more of your money．There are also fantastic offers and competitions only for Winners Club members．
     The Winners Club is a great choice for teenagers．And it is so easy to join．Simply fill．in an application form．You will have to get permission from your parent or guardian（so we can organize  that cool key-card）but it is easy．We can't wait to hear from you．It．he best way to choose to be a winner!
36．The Winners Club is a bank account intended forB．
A．parents        B teenagers          C．winners            D．adults
37．Which of the following is TRUE about the Winners Club？C
A．Special gifts are ready for parents．
B．The bank opens only on work days．
C．Services are convenient for its members．
D．Fees are necessary for the account keeping．
38．The Winners Club provides magazines whichD．
A．encourage spending
B．are free to all teenagers
C．are full of adventure stories
D．help to make more of your money
39．If you want to be a member of the Club，you mustB．
A．be an Internet user
B．be permitted by your parent
C．have a big sum of money
D．be in your twenties
40．What is the purpose of'this text？D
A．To set up a club．
B．To provide part-time jobs．
C．To organize key-cards．
D．To introduce a new banking service．

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