题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,学校要求你们下周二下午去听一个“感动中国”人物孙家栋关于航天知识的讲座,你因故不能参加。请给你们班主任Harris发一封邮件请假。
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100左右;
Dear Mr. Harris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Harris,
I am Li Hua. Deeply sorry for not being able t attend the lecture on space next Tuesday afternoon. I am writing to you in an effort to ask for a leave.
To be honest. I am dying to seize the opportunity to learn more about space through the lecture given by Sun Jiadong, one of the ten Touching-China Role Models. However, it is on the same day that I am going to participate in my interview for admission into Beijing University for which I have prepared for a long time. Meanwhile, I want to make up for the missing lecture. Would it be possible for me to have my classmates record the lecture? If so, I can enjoy the lecture later.
Hoping to have your permission.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:
1.通篇以一般现在时态和将来时为主。
2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。
3.. 注意语气。该文是以向班主任请假为主题,所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。要注意书信的格式问题,言辞要诚恳。
【范文亮点】
文章采用了“Deeply sorry for … 为…深感抱歉”“ask for a leave 请假”“seize the opportunity to … 抓住机会做…”“it is on the same day that …在同一天 ”“Hoping to have your permission 希望得到您的允许”等高分句式。
文章运用了“attend the lecture 参加讲座”“in an effort 努力”“To be honest 老实说”“However 可是”“participate in 参加”“prepared for 为…做准备”“ Meanwhile 与此同时”“ make up 弥补”等高频词组与固定搭配。