题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
On a storm night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following by thunderstorms. I was so terrified that I ran to my bed but hid me under the blanket. To make matters bad, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thoughts. After some time passed, I fall asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever leave me at home alone.
【答案】1.storm→stormy
2.of后加a
3.following→followed
4.but→and
5.me→myself或将me去掉
6.bad→worse
7.with去掉
8.fall→fell
9.that→what
10.ever→never
【解析】
本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者一个人在家经历了一个可怕的夜晚。
第一处:考查形容词。句意:在一个暴风雨的夜晚,我独自一人在家。分析句子结构可知,stormy是形容词,意为“暴风雨的”,修饰night,而storm是名词,故将storm改为stormy。
第二处:考查固定短语。句意:突然,灯灭了。根据句意可知,all of a sudden意为“突然”,故在of后加a。
第三处:考查谓语动词。句意:与此同时,电闪雷鸣。根据句意可知,follow和a flash of lightning是被动关系,故将following改为followed。
第四处:考查并列连词。句意:我吓得跑到床上,把自己藏在毯子下面。根据句意可知,此处是并列关系,而非转折关系,故将but改为and。
第五处:考查代词。句意:我吓得跑到床上,藏在毯子下面。根据句意可知,当宾语人称和主语人称一致时,宾语要用反身代词,故此处的me应该用其反身代词myself,如hide后不用代词,此处的语意也很明确,故将me改为myself或将me去掉。
第六处:考查比较级。句意:更糟糕的是,我的父母去医院陪我生病的爷爷。根据句意可知,make matters worse意为“让事情更糟糕的是”,此处是暗含比较级,故将bad改为worse。
第七处:考查及物动词。根据句意可知,accompany是及物动词,此处无需用介词,故将with去掉。
第八处:考查时态。根据语境可知,此处是讲述过去的事,故用一般过去时,故将fall改为fell。
第九处:考查宾语从句连词。分析句子结构可知,I had seen是从句,其中seen后缺少宾语,而that不作成分,故此处用what引导宾语从句并在从句中做宾语,故将that改为what。
第十处:考查副词。句意:我的父母也很害怕,他们承诺永远不会把我一个人留在家里。根据句意可知,ever意为“曾经”与题意不符,故用never表示否定含义,故将ever改为never。