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2．Don't boast，but be proud of what you've done．These two pieces of advice were tough to balance long before Facebook existed，and the share-it-all nature of today's social media world hasn't made it any easier．It's just difficult to draw a line between a modest boast and straight-up boasting．But one thing we know for sure is that oversharing doesn't do your friendships any favors-a new study out of Carnegie Mellon University proves it．
To find out how social sharing impacts our relationships，Professor George Loewenstein and his colleagues surveyed Amazon employees，dividing them into groups：self-promoters and those who received that self-promotion．Both groups told stories about past experiences with boasting，and how it made them feel．The results？When we inform our peers about our good experiences，we tend to predict their reactions incorrectly．So telling your friends about your great new job or early college admission decision might make them proud of you，but not nearly as proud as you might think．On the other hand，even if you know your news might bother your friends，you probably don't know just how much．
So your sharing behavior could easily be considered annoying or even narcissistic（自恋）．
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）举一到二个例子说明你所经历的社交分享以及它们的影响；
（2）在社交分享中要注意的问题以及方法．
【写作要求】
1．可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据；
2．阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；
3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4．不必写标题．
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
As is illustrated in the passage above，it is crucial to draw a balance between a modest boast and a straight-up boasting because social sharing in different ways will influence our relationships
正如上面的文章所说明的，在适度的吹嘘和直接的自夸之间取得平衡是至关重要的，因为不同方式的社会分享会影响我们的关系．
高分句型二：
I was very excited to tell my friend that I had won the first prize in the math competition and how proud my parents were at the news，only to be received with a cold smile，saying I was lucky enough．
我告诉我的朋友，我在数学竞赛中获得一等奖，多么自豪，我的父母都在消息非常激动，只能收到冷冷一笑，说我很幸运．

解答 One possible version：
As is illustrated in the passage above，it is crucial to draw a balance between a modest boast and a straight-up boasting because social sharing in different ways will influence our relationships（30词概括）（高分句型一）．
That reminds me of an experience．I was very excited to tell my friend that I had won the first prize in the math competition and how proud my parents were at the news，only to be received with a cold smile，saying I was lucky enough（高分句型二）．Not well prepared for her causal response，I stared at her．Worse still，she was weeping with anger．Seeing her sadness，I regretted having told her my result without taking her feeling into consideration．
In my mind，sharing information in a proper way really counts，neither boasting nor assuming．Too much social sharing will have bad effects on the receivers and the givers，making both embarrassed．Dealt with improperly，social information can be misunderstood easily．Hopefully we will handle it well．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．