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【题目】假如你是李华。21世纪报正在举办以“我心中的英雄”为主题的英语演讲比赛初选。请你依照该主题,写一篇英文演讲稿。

要点:1. 你心中的英雄;

2. 选择“英雄”的理由;

3. “英雄”对于你的启发和激励。

要求:1. 词数100左右;

2. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

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【答案】The heroes in my heart are those white angels who have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19 and saved thousands of people’s lives.

The reason why I choose them as my heroes is that they reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness. Risking their lives, those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus. Because of their dedication and sacrifice, the severe situation of this pandemic in our country has been totally eased and everything is under control and back to normal.

It is their bravery and sacrifice that guarantee a victory in this brutal battle, which has inspired me to value the beautiful life we are living now and do whatever I can to contribute to a better one.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一篇演讲稿。

第一步:

审题:演讲稿

人称:第一人称

时态:一般现在时

结构:分三部分,第一部分说明谁是你心中的英雄,第二部分选择他们为“英雄”的理由,第三部分说明“英雄”对于你的启发和激励。

要点:

1. 谁是你心中的英雄:与新冠肺炎英勇做斗争的白衣天使

2.选择他们为“英雄”的理由:

①他们反映了民族最宝贵的品质:责任感、勇敢、无私

②他们冒着生命危险与病毒作斗争

3.说明“英雄”对于你的启发和激励:珍惜现在美好的生活,努力创造更好的生活

第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)

white angelsfight againstsave one’s livesreflectresponsibilitybraveryselflessnessrisk one’s lifedeadly virusdedicationsacrificeeaseunder controlback to normalguarantee inspire sb. to do…valuecontribute to

第三步:连词成句

(1)The heroes in my heart are those white angels.

(2) They have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19.

(3) They have saved thousands of people’s lives.

(4) I choose them as my heroes.

(5) They reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness. (6)They risk their own lives.

(7) Those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus.

(8) The severe situation of this pandemic in our country has been totally eased.

(9) Everything is under control and back to normal.

(10) Their bravery and sacrifice guarantee a victory in this brutal battle.

(11) It has inspired me to value the beautiful life we are living now.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

用定语从句连接下面三个句子

(1) The heroes in my heart are those white angels.

(2) They have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19.

(3) They have saved thousands of people’s lives.

→The heroes in my heart are those white angels who have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19 and saved thousands of people’s lives.

用句型“The reason why… is that …”连接下面两个句子

(4) I choose them as my heroes.

(5) They reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness.

→The reason why I choose them as my heroes is that they reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness.

用分词作状语连接下面两个句子

(6)They risk their own lives.

(7) Those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus.

→Risking their lives, those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus.

用强调句型改写下面的句子

(10) Their bravery and sacrifice guarantee a victory in this brutal battle.

→It is their bravery and sacrifice that guarantee a victory in this brutal battle.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次,增加文章的可读性。

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Practice working hard.

2 Therefore, if you want to be a hard worker, you must practice working hard. Practice waking up early, practice doing a lot of work, and practice working more hours. One day you will wake up and realize that you are a hard worker.

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Many hard workers always have a large purpose that forces them to work. Don’t just think of buying a car or a big house because this is not a purpose strong enough to push you forward. An example of a big purpose is deciding that you are working hard so that you bring change in the lives of your friends, family, and neighborhood. A strong purpose always involves bringing a large positive change in any particular setting.

Surround yourself with hard workers.

4 But if you surround yourself with hardworking people, you will find yourself working hard towards your goal. Avoid friends who just want to have fun all the time. This type of friends will always discourage you when you attempt to work hard. Therefore, always surround yourself with go-getters.

Read and watch inspirational materials.

You can also push yourself harder through reading and watching inspirational material.

5 These materials make you work hard because they remove discouragement and assure you that you will never fail if you push yourself to the limit.

A.Have a strong purpose.

B.Find a great goal to overcome your laziness.

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2 But if students’ clock doesn’t agree with the rest of their lives, their performance was likely to suffer.

According to the study, those students who suffered from a mismatch underwent a kind of “social jet lag(时差)”. For example, some students performed best at night and therefore chose to study in the evening. But if those students had an early morning class, they often felt tired from late night studying and didn’t get the most out of the class. They might then go on to get a lower grade for exams and coursework. 3

The authors say mismatches between a student’s schedule and circadian clock can have a harmful effect, and not just in terms of academic performance. Social jet lag can also be bad for students’ health.

The authors don’t claim their study proves anything, but they do say that it provides food for thought for school administrators, who might like to think about special ways to help students who suffer on account of their schedules. 4

A.In addition, the findings alerted parents to their children’s sleeping patterns.

B.The study found that the closer a student’s schedule and their circadian clock, the better their grades were.

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F.Now, a new study suggests that the relationship between students’ circadian clocks and their study schedules can have a big effect on their grades.

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1What do we know about Sydenham Garden?

A.Sydenham Garden Can't keep pace with is surroundings.

B.Sydenham Garden is beneficial to people with mental health.

C.Sydenham Garden is very large with a well-being centre.

D.Sydenham Garden holds therapeutic gardening activities monthly.

2What can we infer from Christine Dow's example?

A.She helped others overcome depression.

B.She was an experienced staff in Sydenham Garden.

C.She devoted herself to referring others to the projects.

D.She might be grateful to this "green" therapy.

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