题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华。21世纪报正在举办以“我心中的英雄”为主题的英语演讲比赛初选。请你依照该主题,写一篇英文演讲稿。
要点:1. 你心中的英雄;
2. 选择“英雄”的理由;
3. “英雄”对于你的启发和激励。
要求:1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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【答案】The heroes in my heart are those white angels who have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19 and saved thousands of people’s lives.
The reason why I choose them as my heroes is that they reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness. Risking their lives, those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus. Because of their dedication and sacrifice, the severe situation of this pandemic in our country has been totally eased and everything is under control and back to normal.
It is their bravery and sacrifice that guarantee a victory in this brutal battle, which has inspired me to value the beautiful life we are living now and do whatever I can to contribute to a better one.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一篇演讲稿。
第一步:
审题:演讲稿
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
结构:分三部分,第一部分说明谁是你心中的英雄,第二部分选择他们为“英雄”的理由,第三部分说明“英雄”对于你的启发和激励。
要点:
1. 谁是你心中的英雄:与新冠肺炎英勇做斗争的白衣天使
2.选择他们为“英雄”的理由:
①他们反映了民族最宝贵的品质:责任感、勇敢、无私
②他们冒着生命危险与病毒作斗争
3.说明“英雄”对于你的启发和激励:珍惜现在美好的生活,努力创造更好的生活
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
white angels;fight against;save one’s lives;reflect;responsibility;bravery;selflessness;risk one’s life;deadly virus;dedication;sacrifice;ease;under control;back to normal;guarantee; inspire sb. to do…;value;contribute to
第三步:连词成句
(1)The heroes in my heart are those white angels.
(2) They have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19.
(3) They have saved thousands of people’s lives.
(4) I choose them as my heroes.
(5) They reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness. (6)They risk their own lives.
(7) Those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus.
(8) The severe situation of this pandemic in our country has been totally eased.
(9) Everything is under control and back to normal.
(10) Their bravery and sacrifice guarantee a victory in this brutal battle.
(11) It has inspired me to value the beautiful life we are living now.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用定语从句连接下面三个句子
(1) The heroes in my heart are those white angels.
(2) They have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19.
(3) They have saved thousands of people’s lives.
→The heroes in my heart are those white angels who have fought bravely in the battle against the COVID-19 and saved thousands of people’s lives.
用句型“The reason why… is that …”连接下面两个句子
(4) I choose them as my heroes.
(5) They reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness.
→The reason why I choose them as my heroes is that they reflect the most valuable spirit of our nation, responsibility, bravery and selflessness.
用分词作状语连接下面两个句子
(6)They risk their own lives.
(7) Those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus.
→Risking their lives, those doctors and nurses have been fighting on the front line against this deadly virus.
用强调句型改写下面的句子
(10) Their bravery and sacrifice guarantee a victory in this brutal battle.
→It is their bravery and sacrifice that guarantee a victory in this brutal battle.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次,增加文章的可读性。