题目内容
【题目】假如你是2015年美康“中文桥”Chinese Language Bridge美国学生来华夏令营的一名中方工作人员李华,收到了美国营员Peter的电子邮件,他在动身来中国之前,想了解一下中方给他安排的寄宿家庭的有关情况,请你根据下列信息回复邮件:
1.住房宽敞,有私家车;
2.懂英语,乐于交流;
3.2014年接待过美国学生。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking about something about the family we have arranged for you to stay.
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking about something about the family we have arranged for you to stay.
Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, a large fully-equipped apartment answers all your needs. Apart from the convenient public transportation, the family’s own car can also take you to some nearby places of interest. Because all the members of the family can speak fluent English and are outgoing, I’m sure you will have no difficulty communicating with them. Above all, they hosted two American students last year, through which they’ve gained lots of experience. In addition, the hostess’ expert cooking can guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.
Now they are fully prepared to host you and make friends with you. And I hope you will have a pleasant time in China. See you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于书信,根据提示信息来写一封给外国来宾提供信息的信。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读题目,弄清楚所给出的要点,适当增加内容以充实文章;2、注意时态及语法,不要出现低级错误,注意自己的口吻要符合中方工作人员的身份;3、适当运用高级词汇及恰当的连接词,来为文章增色。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构,很好的涵盖了题目中的要求。熟练地运用了多种短语及单词,如host招待,guarantee确保,have no difficulty in doing sth做某事没有困难。连接词的使用使得文章条理顺畅,如Apart from除此之外,Above all尤其是,In addition还有。也运用了高级句式使得文章增色,如Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, a large fully-equipped apartment answers all your needs.是一句倒装句,they hosted two American students last year, through which they’ve gained lots of experience.非限制性定语从句。结尾And I hope you will have a pleasant time in China. See you soon.语气亲切诚恳,符合自己的身份。