题目内容
【题目】文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改,每句中最多有两处。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1).每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I am proud what I did. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
【答案】①usually改为usual ②while改为when ③hear改为heard ④happened改为happening ⑤shocking改为shocked ⑥peoples改为people ⑦把had去掉 ⑧but改为and ⑨his改为my ⑩在proud 后加of
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文,上周六我和往常一样去图书馆,当我在湖边看书的时候,突然听到喊救命声。我立马跑过去看看发生了什么事情,让人震惊的是我看到一个小孩在水里挣扎,我毫不犹豫得跳进水中,终于把孩子救了上来。
①考查固定短语 。as usual固定短语,“像往常一样”,所以把usually改为usual。
②考查连词。 be doing sth ……when固定句型,“正在做某事这时”,while后不能跟短暂性动词,把while改为when。
③考查时态。根据语境可知作者叙述过去的事情,故把hear改为heard。
④考查时态。happen是不及物动词,没有被动形式,根据语境可知此处表示当时正在发生的事情,故用进行时态,把happened改为happening。
⑤考查形容词。shocking意思是“令人震惊的”,指事物的特征,shocked意思是“感到震惊的”指的是人的感受,所以把shocking改为shocked。
⑥考查名词。people当“人们”讲时,没有复数形式,如果当“民族”讲时,可以有复数形式,故把peoples改为people。
⑦考查时态。从事情发生的情况可以判断作者一边推开人群,一边脱外套,表示两个动作同时发生,而不表示动作先后,不用过去完成时态,故把had去掉。
⑧考查连词。根据语境可知took off和jumped into是连续发出的动作,没有转折关系,故把but改为and。
⑨考查代词。根据语境可知看到孩子安然无恙,作者感到如释重负,把his改为my。
⑩考查介词。be proud of 固定短语“对……感到骄傲,自豪”,后面跟名词,代词,动名词或what从句,所以在proud 后加of。
