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8.内容:劳动节即将来临,我们将放三天假.有人打算去旅游,有人准备待在家里.请为你自己制定一份节日计划,并谈谈你的理由.要求:1.有明确的计划和相应的理由
2.字数:100左右.
3.开头句已写好,不计入字数. Labor Day is coming and we'll have three days off.
Labor Day is coming and we'll have three days off.It's great.Personally,I think it will be a wonderful holiday.Recently,we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam,which has really got us tired out.SoI'd like to have a good rest at home,reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep.Also,during the holiday,the weather must be fine,neither too hot nor too cold.It's the right season for an outing.Ican't wait to enjoy the beauty of nature with my family or friends.Of course,as a senior middle school student,there's no doubt that Ishould attach great importance to my study.Idecide to make use of the last day of the holiday to think about my new study plan and do my homework..
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
Recently,we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam,which has really got us tired out.
最近,我们一直在忙着准备期中考试,这真的让我们很累了.
高分句型二:
Of course,as a senior middle school student,there's no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study.
当然,作为一个高中学生,毫无疑问,我应该重视我的学习.
解答 Labor Day is coming and we'll have three days off.It's great.Personally,I think it will be a wonderful holiday.Recently,we have been busy preparing the mid-term exam,which has really got us tired out(高分句型一).So I'd like to have a good rest at home,reading some interesting books for fun and having enough sleep.Also,during the holiday,the weather must be fine,neither too hot nor too cold.It's the right season for an outing.I can't wait to enjoy the beauty of nature with my family or friends.Of course,as a senior middle school student,there's no doubt that I should attach great importance to my study(高分句型二).I decide to make use of the last day of the holiday to think about my new study plan and do my homework.
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
A. | help | B. | to have helped | C. | to help | D. | having helped |
But none of that will make us happier.And the sad thing is that it can take us decades of pursuing (追求) wealth and expensive things before we realize that.So what will bring us happiness?Luckily,there are three things that don't cost anything.Here they are:
Good relationships.We have a human need to be close with other human beings.Having good,supportive friendships,a strong marriage or loving relationships with our family members will make us much more likely to be happy.Therefore,take time,today,to stay with your loved ones,to tell them what they mean to you,to listen to them,and to develop your relationships with them.
Positive thinking.Optimism(乐观) is one of the best indicators of people who lead a happy life.Happy people feel empowered,in control of their lives.So why not make positive thinking a habit?In fact,this should be one of the first habits you develop.
Flow.This is a popular concept on the Internet these days 一 the state we enter when we are completely focused on the work or task.Having work and leisure(休闲)that gets you in this state of flow will almost undoubtedly lead to happiness.People find the greatest enjoyment not when they're passively mindless,but when they're absorbed in a mindful challenge.
If you are interested in some kind of work and keen on some kind of hobbies,it is not a bad idea.Turn off the TV 一 this is the opposite of flow 一 and then go outside and do something that truly makes you active.
Title | Three Secrets to(61)Happiness | |
Some people's (62) thought/attitude/opinion/view/idea. | If we were(63)richer/wealthier,we would have a happier life. | |
Fact | It will be a long time before we(64)realize money cannot make us happier. | |
Advice | Set up good relationships | ●We are much more(65)likelyto be happy if we have good relationships. ●Tell your loved ones they mean a lot to you and listen to them,(66) developingyour relationships with them. |
Think(67) positively. | ●People who lead a happy life are believed to be optimistic. ●People need to(68) form/developthe habit of making positive thinking. | |
Flow | ●When we are (69)devoted/committed_ to our work or task,we find the greatest happiness. ●Find work that (70)interestsyou and hobbies you are keen on. |