Question

16．2010年以来，我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件，使国人为之震惊，震惊之余，大家都陷入了沉思：我们该如何加强校园安全呢？请你以How to improve school safety为题，写一篇120词左右的短文．
参考词汇：校园campus 保安security guard．

Answer 1

分析 本文考查开放性作文的写作要求考生，就我国相继发生的几起校园暴力事件，反思我们该如何加强校园安全呢？没有什么要点给出，考生可以选择自己了解的事例进行描述，合理组织语言，也可以合理的想象，运用自己能够掌握的语言技能合理的写作．开放性作文的难度较大，要求考生自己根据文章内容梳理要点，然后在整理成文，在写作时要合理运用连接词和高级词汇高级句型，让文章更有层次．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
Greaat efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe．（高分句型一）make sure 确保  make efforts 作出努力
Besides，the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away．（高分句型二）from time to time 不时地；besides，另外
As for us students，we should keep safety in mind whatever we do．（高分句型三）as for 至于，关于；keep…in mind 牢记

解答 How to improve the school safety
     School safety is a matter of great importance．Greaat efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe．（高分句型一）（点明本文主题）Firstly，nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission．The school guard should check everyone entering the school strictly．Besides，the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away．（高分句型二）More importantly，school safety education should be offered by the school．Students can be taught what to do when faced with danger．（提出应对措施）
     As for us students，we should keep safety in mind whatever we do．（高分句型三）We shouldn't trust strangers or give away our personal information to them．（发出呼吁）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．