题目内容
13．假如你是一名高三年级的学生，你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜．白天也不安排休息时间，但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡，有些同学饮食习惯不好，不吃早餐．请你写篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食，保证学习好、身体好．要求：1．字数100字左右．
2．可适当发挥，使讲话完整通畅．
分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：And some classmates seldom have breakfast，which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health．有些同学很少吃早餐，这也是一种坏习惯，肯定会损害他们的健康．这是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前边整个句子的意思．
亮点句型二：We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well．我们必须学会明智地利用我们的时间，只有这样我们才能保持健康，好好学习．这是由and连接的并列句，其中only in this way can we keep fit and study well是一个倒装句，only引导的状语提前，主句做部分倒装．
解答 Dear classmates
It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today．Recently，I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either，but they often cannot help falling asleep in class．And some classmates seldom have breakfast，which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health．（亮点句型一）
In my opinion，it's extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet．We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well．（亮点句型二）I wonder if you agree with me．
Thank you for listening!
点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
-No problem．（ ）
| A． | When | B． | that | C． | whether | D． | what |
A major problem apparently is the nicotine，a poisonous substance found in tobacco．Small amounts of nicotine are released as tobacco is burned．And over many years of smoking，a person's body becomes dependent on the substance．An attempt to stop smoking brings the problems of nicotine withdrawal（脱瘾过程）．
American medical researchers have found that nicotine withdrawal causes people to become angry very easily，aggressive，worried and unable to think sharply．Many people who have tried to stop smoking would confirm those findings．
To help people give up smoking，some tobacco companies have proposed chewing tobacco，or using snuff as safe substitutes（替代物）．Snuff is a tobacco powder that usually is breathed in．But many people put it between their gum and cheek．
A group of British scientists said recently that many lives could be saved by a major program to get cigarette smokers to change to snuff．An American scientist，Allan Blum，disagreed．Dr．Blum argued that snuff，put in the mouth，can cause gum disease，teeth problems and throat problems that lead to cancer．Dr．Blum also warned against chewing tobacco as a substitute for smoking．He said chewing tobacco can lead to cancer of the mouth，throat or digestive system．
Medical researchers say another possible substitute for smoking is a special nicotine chewing gum．The gum is already sold in Europe and Canada．A report says research shows that the chewing gum will increase the amount of nicotine in a person's blood．This helps satisfy some people's desire for a cigarette．However，the report says，the chewing gum also leads to some unpleasant side effects．And it may be dangerous for people with heart problems．
Two other American scientists say they have found that the most effective way to stop smoking is to do it completely，suddenly，all at once．The report by Saul Shirtman and Dr．Murray Jogbett says that by stopping all at once，the worst problems of nicotine withdrawal are over in just a few days．But，they say，by continuing to smoke，even a little less each day，the problems of withdrawal never end completely．
| Bad effects of smoking | Many kinds of disease and a number of other medical （61）problems are connected with smoking． | ||
| Difficulty in stopping smoking | The （62）reason for this is that smokers are （63） dependent on nicotine，a poisonous substance in tobacco，and people （64）trying/attempting to stop smoking have emotional problems and are unable to think sharply． | ||
| （65） Ways/Measures to stop smoking | Looking for substitutes for smoking | Snuff | Causing gum disease，teeth problems and throat problems （66）leadingto cancer． |
| Chewing tobacco | Causing cancer of the mouth，throat or digestive system | ||
| Nicotine chewing gum | ◆Helping satisfy some people's desire for a cigarette by （67）increasing/raisingthe amount of nicotine in one's blood． ◆Having some side effects and being dangerous for people who （68）sufferfrom heart problems． | ||
| Giving up smoking （69） completely，suddenly，all at once | In a few days，the worst problems of nicotine withdrawal no longer （70） exist/appear． | ||