题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是张华,你的朋友李明在骑车上学的途中遇到车祸,腿受伤并在医院接受了手术。请你代表全班同学给他写一封慰问信,表达以下几点信息:
1、听说他住院并接受了手术,表示慰问;2、你们将在周六上午去看望他;3、将会帮助他补习所缺的功课;4、愿意提供任何可能的帮助。
文章必须包含以上要点,词数为100~120。
【答案】
Dear Li Ming,
How are you now? All of us are worried about you. We were shocked when we heard that you were knocked down by a truck while cycling to school. We are sorry to have learned that you have had an operation on your injured leg and that you have to stay in hospital. Let us hope that it will be for only a very short time, and that you will soon be out of hospital. Everybody here sends his best wishes to you for a quick recovery.
We’ll come to see you on Saturday morning. We have decided to help you with your lessons that you have missed. So, don’t worry and be patient. If there is anything we can do for you, please let us know when we come. We are always ready to help you.
Hope you will recover soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇慰问信,是张华代表全班同学给受伤住院的李明写的一封慰问信。首先注意文章的书写格式,这是一篇信件类的文章,对格式有一定要求:开头顶格写称谓,另起一行空两格写正文,最后一段写祝愿,最后落款。其次就是理解文章的大意,对文章的脉络进行概括,然后书写。
从大题中可知,本文主要是站在李华的角度上代替全班同学为李明写一封慰问信。其次,根据题目中给的要点,拟写文章的段落大纲,进行书写。本文主要分成三个部分:第一部分是同学们送上的祝福,第二部分是告知李明将会去看望他,第三部分就是表明同学们会为李明提供一切可以的帮助。文章的段落清晰,用词简洁大方。值得同学们借以参考。