题目内容
5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Traditional Chinese culture is facing extinction with the development of society．As a result of，China is sparing no effort to protect it．The protection of national culture is not only of great significant to Chinese cultural diversity but also to the harmonious development between local economy and society．What is reported，special attention has paid by the Guangdong government in order to protect Chaoju．
In my opinion，some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture efficient．To start with，we should make a law to protect traditional culture．Beside，we should draw more people's attention to them．The more they know about the importance of culture protection，the strong support we can get from the public．
In the word，it is high time that we must treasure our own valuable culture．
分析 本文主要呼吁公众要保护传统的中国文化．保护传统文化不仅对文化的多样性有意义，也对当地经济和社会的发展有意义．可以采用立法来保护，也可以让公众知道文化保护的重要性．
解答 Traditional Chinese culture is facing extinction with the development of society．As a result of，China is sparing no effort to protect it．The protection of national culture is not only of great significant to Chinese cultural diversity but also to the harmonious development between local economy and society．What is reported，special attention has∧paid by the Guangdong government in order to protect Chaoju．
In my opinion，some measures should be taken to protect traditional culture efficient．To start with，we should make a law to protect traditional culture．Beside，we should draw more people's attention to them．The more they know about the importance of culture protection，the strong support we can get from the public．
In the word，it is high time that we must treasure our own valuable culture．
1．去掉of 考查词语用法．as a result意为"结果，因此"，as a result of意为"由于…的结果"，此处应是：结果，因此．
2．significant改为significance 考查名词．"of+抽象名词"构成的短语相当于该抽象名词的同根形容词，即：be of significance=be significant．
3．What改为As 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是后面整个句子，用关系代词as．
4．加been 考查动词语态． attention与pay之间是动宾关系，用现在完成时的被动语态．
5．efficient改为efficiently 考查副词．protect是动词，要用副词修饰．
6．Beside改为Besides 考查词语用法．beside意为"在…旁边；在…附近"，是介词，besides意为"而且，也"，是副词，此处应是：而且，也．
7．them改为it 考查代词．it指代traditional culture，是单数形式．
8．strong 改为stronger 考查固定句型．"the more…，the more…"句型常表示"越…就越…"，是一个复合句，其中前面的句子是状语从句，后面的句子是主句．the用在形容词或副词的比较级前，more代表形容词或副词的比较级．
9．the 改为a 考查冠词．in a word意为"总而言之"，是固定搭配．
10．must改为should 考查定语从句．it is high time that…意为"到了…的时候"，后接从句时谓语动词用一般过去时态或should+动词原形．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
