根据最新颁布的.你校举办校园之星(Star of the Campus)评选活动.你班李华获此殊荣．请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文.介绍李华的综合素质情况．高中学生综合素质评价思想品德学业水平身心健康艺术素养社会实践要求:1．短文内容应包括综合素质的五个方面.但不得逐字翻译,2．文中不得出现真实姓名.校名和地名,3．词数120左右．开头已给� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．根据最新颁布的《关于加强和改进普通高中学生综合素质评价的意见》，你校举办校园之星（Star of the Campus）评选活动，你班李华获此殊荣．请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍李华的综合素质情况．
高中学生综合素质评价思想品德学业水平身心健康艺术素养社会实践

要求：1．短文内容应包括综合素质的五个方面，但不得逐字翻译；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
3．词数120左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Being an excellent student with all-round development，Li Huahas been honored asStar of the Campus．
He spends most of his spare time doing volunteer work atweekends，helping the old or the disabled，which shows his character of responsibility and kindness．With great intelligence，diligence，good learning methods andpositive attitudes，he studies well in all the subjects and often ranks among the top threein the class．After class，he is active in the playground，music clubs and some communities．The sport he likes most isplaying basketball and he has served as leader of our school basketball teamfor two years．He also takesgreat delightin Chinese opera as well assinging pop songs．Besides，he takes an active part in all sorts of social practices．
In a word，Li Hua is an outstanding student，who has set a good examplefor us．．

分析本文是一篇图表+提纲式作文．根据所提供的材料信息，介绍李华的综合素质情况，写一篇短文．
写作要点包括：1．思想品德；2．学业水平；3．身心健康；4．艺术素养；5社会实践；．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主．
重要短语：all-rounddevelopment （全面发展），be honored as （荣获），spend time doing （花费时间做…），rank among the top three（排名前三），serve as（作为，充当），take great delight in （以…为乐），take an active partin （积极参加），in a word （总之），set a good example for （为…树立榜样）．
【高分句型】
1．Being an excellent student with all-round development，Li Hua has been honored as Star of the Campus．
这里是现在分词being作原因状语，主句的主语LiHua与动词be存在逻辑上的主动关系．
2．He spends most of his spare time doing volunteer work at weekends，①helping the old or the disabled，②which shows his character of responsibility and kindness．
①这里是现在分词helping作方式状语，主句的主语he与所给动词help构成逻辑上的主动关系．
②这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容He spends most of his spare time doing volunteer work at weekends，helping the old or the disabled．

解答 Beingan excellent student with all-round development，Li Hua hasbeen honored as Star of the Campus．【高分句型】（开头）
He spends most of his spare time doing volunteer work atweekends，helping the old or the disabled，which shows his character of responsibility and kindness．【高分句型】（思想品德）With great intelligence，diligence，good learning methods and positive attitudes，he studies well in all thesubjects and often ranks among the top three in the class．（学业水平） After class，he is active in theplayground，music clubs and some communities．The sport he likes most is playing basketball and he hasserved as leader of our school basketball team for two years．（身心健康）He also takes great delight in Chinese opera aswell as singing pop songs．（艺术素养） Besides，he takes an active part in all sorts of social practices．（社会实践）
In a word，Li Hua is an outstanding student，who has set a good examplefor us．【高分句型】（总结概括）

点评写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．