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【题目】书面表达

随着网络的普及，越来越多的中学生上网交友。某英语报社就“Should students make friends online?”这个主题进行了征文大赛。 请你给该报社投稿。

内容要点：1.网上交友优点：（轻松交友，畅所欲言，帮助学外语）

2.网上交友弊端：（浪费时间，分散精力，有时会上当受骗）

3.你自己的看法。

要求：1.词数120 字左右；（开头已给，不计入总词数）

2.内容充实， 结构完整，语句连贯。

Should Students Make Friends Online?

Whatever your age is , the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Should Students Make Friends Online?

Whatever your age is , the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.

The advantage of making friends online is that students can express their feelings and opinions more freely . Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies . At the same time /In the meanwhile ,it can be helpful for them to communicate in English which can be beneficial to their foreign languages studies.

However ,each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of their precious time ,which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides , some even get cheated online without caution.

In my opinion, students should bury themselves into their study . As for friendship, students can readily find it among their familiar people around them.

【解析】试题分析：随着网络的普及，越来越多的中学生上网交友。某英语报社就“Should students make friends online?”这个主题进行了征文大赛。 请你给该报社投稿。内容要点：1.网上交友优点：（轻松交友，畅所欲言，帮助学外语）2.网上交友弊端：（浪费时间，分散精力，有时会上当受骗）3.你自己的看法。

这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为书信文体，即介绍主要行程；又根据“你给该报社投稿” 写作时即用第一人称“我”；时态主要用一般现在时即可或一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章第二段网上交友的优点。第三段网上交友的确定，第四段自己的看法。文章使用了which引导的定语从句which can be beneficial to their foreign languages studies.（这对他们的外语学习很有益）和which should be spent more meaningfully on study（应该更多地花费在学习上的）；动词的ing形式作主语Making friends online（网上交友）。高级词汇和短语：as for至于，however尽管如此，besides而且。最后一句使用As for friendship, students can readily find it among their familiar people around them至于友谊，学生们乐意在他们熟悉的人中找到友谊，作者有力地支持了自己的观点，给文章一个完美的结束。