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5．手机，通讯时代的代名词，潮流的代养人．如今，全国约有几亿人在使用手机．手机在给我们带来巨大便利的同时，也出现了诸多问题，请以"手机的利弊"为题，对此展开论述，并发表自己的观点．（120字左右）

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Cell phones do play an important role in people's daily life，but every coin has its two sides．
手机确实在人们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，但凡事都有两面．
高分句型二：
For one thing，the machine itself is very expensive and its local service is very costly，not to mention its global service．
一方面，机器本身非常昂贵，本地服务费用高昂，更不用说它的全球服务了．

解答 My Opinion on Cell Phones
　　Cell phones do play an important role in people's daily life，but every coin has its two sides（高分句型一）．
　　To start with，as a wireless mobile phone，it's convenient for the user at any time to contact others．Secondly，it's a helpful companion．With a multifunctional cell phone in hand，one can easily surf the net，downloading what he needs．
　　However，the cell phone has many disadvantages．For one thing，the machine itself is very expensive and its local service is very costly，not to mention its global service（高分句型二）．For another，the radiation transmitted from the mobile phones might do harm to the user's health．
　　In my opinion，with its expenses being reduced sharply，its development will have a brighter future．Therefore its advantages will far outweigh its disadvantages

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．