Question

3．假如你是李华，你的美国网友Jack想参加中央电视台的星光大道（Avenue of Stars），特写信向你询问相关情况．请你根据所给要点提示给他写一封回信，告知相关事宜．
要点提示：
1．简单介绍星光大道：普通人展示才艺的舞台，深受观众喜爱；
2．参赛选手展示才艺：唱歌、跳舞等；
3．报名：网上提前报名；
4．建议：学一些简单的汉语．
注意：
1．字数100字左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．书写整洁．
参考词汇：参赛选手 participant
Dear Jack，
                                              
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类提纲类作文的写作，要善于使用不同的句型．英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换．学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型如范文中I'm very glad to hear that…；I sincerely hope…等自如的表达自己的意思，本文运用了participate in、including、show one's talents、apply for等短语和单词．本文也有很多句型值得学习，如I suggest that you learn a little Chinese so that you will be better understood．目的状语从句，I sincerely hope you will be elected and come to China soon．运用了宾语从句，It is loved deeply by the audience and introduced a lot of grassroots stars运用了be deeply by的被动语态，这样文章才能写出新意．

解答 Dear Jack，
      I'm very glad to hear that you want to participate in the program Avenue of Stars on CCTV．
      Avenue of Stars provides a stage for ordinary people to show their talents．It is loved deeply by the audience and introduced a lot of grassroots stars，including some foreigners．（高分句型一）The participants should show their talents，such as singing，dancing and so on．As you are a foreigner，I suggest that you learn a little Chinese so that you will be better understood．（高分句型二）You have to apply for it on the related website in advance．
      I sincerely hope you will be elected and come to China soon．Then I will cheer for you on the spot．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．