题目内容
【题目】假如你是Simon,你收到一封名叫Flower的网友发来的E-mail,她向你询问如何交友。请给她发一封E-mail,并提出建议。
要点:1.交朋友首先要对别人友善;
2.要使陌生人感到亲切;
3.与别人有分歧时,不吵架,要商量;
4.不要相信在困境中背叛朋友的人,因为“患难见真情”。
注意:1.词数100左右(格式及开头已给出,不计入总数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Flower,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. You asked me about how to make friends. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Simon
【答案】
Dear Flower,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. You asked me about how to make friends. The following is my advice.
Everyone needs friends, so knowing how to make friends is very important. First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others. Then, look after others more than yourself. In my opinion, you should try to make the stranger feel easy wherever he/she is. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I don’t think it’s necessary to quarrel with them. Finally, I don’t trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
I hope everything goes on well with you, and you’ll make a lot of good friends.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Simon
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇书信写作,根据题目要求,可以分为3部分设计:1.表达写信目的;2.作文主体,按要求叙述要点;3.表达希望。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。文章主要讲述自己对交朋友的看法,时态主要用一般现在时态。在写作时选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型,将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识,避开生僻的词汇,并克服母语的干扰,按照英语的习惯方式,用地道的英语表达出来,力求做到语言准确无误。
【亮点说明】本文语言凝练,条理层次清晰。文章总共三段,第一段表达写信目的;第二段按要求叙述要点,并用合适的连词或短语连接上下文,使文章结构紧凑,过渡自然,如first, then,finally, in my opinion, I don’t think等等;最后一段表达希望。文章使用了动名词做主语knowing how to make friends is very important; 定语从句I don’t trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble等高级语法结构;常用表达be friendly to..., make friends,look after, 以及谚语a friend in need is a friend indeed。
【题目】假如你是高二年级李华,你刚刚参加完一个为期一个月的语言学校的英语培训,请你根据以下提示,写一封抱怨信。
注意:1. 字数100字左右。
2. 信的开头已为你写好,字数不算在内。
不满原因 | 1. 学生太多,影响效果。 2. 不提供午饭,最近的餐馆(cafe)要走20分钟 3. 社会活动少,只有排球;没有组织参观游览,与广告不符。 |
要求 | 退款,否则采取进一步行动。 |