题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年寒假你参加了学校组织的赴美游学活动。请给接待你的史密斯夫妇写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 感谢对你的照顾;
2. 感谢带你体验西方文化;
3. 邀请他们来中国游玩。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
How’s everything going? It’s been almost a week since I left America and I miss you very much.
During the winter holiday, you took good care of me. Your love made me feel at home. Besides, you showed me around New York and the visit to Times Square was great, which left me a good memory and helped me learn more about American culture. Thank you very much.
I hope you’ll come to China one day and I’ll take you to the places of interest in Beijing. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语take care of 照顾;show sb around领着某人参观;a place of interest 名胜古迹。Look forward to 盼望着;It’s been almost a week since I left America and I miss you very much这个句子运用到现在完成时;Besides, you showed me around New York and the visit to Times Square was great, which left me a good memory and helped me learn more about American culture这个句子运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句;