Question

【题目】假如你是高二年级李华，你刚刚参加完一个为期一个月的语言学校的英语培训，请你根据以下提示，写一封抱怨信。

注意：1. 字数100字左右。

2. 信的开头已为你写好，字数不算在内。

不满原因	1. 学生太多，影响效果。 2. 不提供午饭，最近的餐馆（cafe）要走20分钟 3. 社会活动少，只有排球；没有组织参观游览，与广告不符。
要求	退款，否则采取进一步行动。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have just returned from a month’s stay at your Falcon School of Languages, and I am writing to express my unhappiness with your program.

I thought that a language course would help me improve my English. But the classes had far too many students, which stopped me from making my progress.

To make matters worse, no meals were provided. When I wanted to eat I had to go to the nearest café, which was 20 minutes away.

You said in your ad that students could enjoy many social activities. However, volleyball was the only activity offered, and although there were many interesting things to see in the city, no trips were organized.

You can imagine how upset I am to have wasted my time and money. Please give me my money back, or I shall be forced to take the matter further.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当添加细节以使行文连贯。注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语书信。格式正确，内容齐全，结构严谨，布局合理，使用高级句子。I thought that a language course would help me improve my English. that引导宾语从句；But the classes had far too many students, which stopped me from making my progress. which引导非限制性定语从句；To make matters worse独立成分的运用堪称经典；When I wanted to eat I had to go to the nearest café, which was 20 minutes away.时间状语从句和非限制性定语从句完美结合；volleyball was the only activity offered过去分词作后置定语；although there were many interesting things to see in the city, no trips were organized. although引导让步状语从句；另外，But，However, or的运用为文章增色添彩。