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【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，你们班的英语老师要求每个同学在课堂上分享自己交友的经验。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

1. 你是如何看待友谊的；

2. 你是怎么选择朋友的；

3. 你是如何维持与朋友之间的友谊的。

注意: 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

As the saying goes，“Friendship is like sunshine, it keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hang out together and have fun.

I like to choose people who are kind, honest and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears with them whenever I get into trouble.

Now I have some good friends who trust me. I always care about what has happened to them, so I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and playing. I try to offer some advice to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to maintain friendships.

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是李华，你们班的英语老师要求每个同学在课堂上分享自己交友的经验。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。1. 你是如何看待友谊的；2. 你是怎么选择朋友的；3. 你是如何维持与朋友之间的友谊的。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意: 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】As the saying goes，“Friendship is like sunshine, it keeps us warm and helps us grow.”as引导的非限制性定语从句，并运用谚语；I think it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hang out together and have fun.宾语从句和目的状语从句完美结合；I like to choose people who are kind, honest and helpful as my friends.定语从句运用灵活；I like to share my thoughts and fears with them whenever I get into trouble. whenever引导让步状语从句；Now I have some good friends who trust me.句中再次使用定语从句；I always care about what has happened to them, so I call them once a week.并列句中使用了宾语从句；I try to offer some advice to my friends when necessary.省略句的运用为文章增色添彩。