Question

7．The other day，BBC broadcast its documentary（纪录片）"Are Our Kids Tough Enough？-Chinese School"，in which the British and Chinese teaching styles competed against each other，with both sides tested after four weeks to see who comes out on top．
In this unique experiment，five Chinese teachers took over a British classroom with 50teenagers aged 13and 14in a British school for one month and taught them in a typical Chinese way：no talking，no questions and experiencing the severe classroom discipline within an extended school-hour from 7a．m．to 7p．m．In the meantime，another group of students were guided in the British teaching style：free talking，free questioning，thinking for themselves and relaxing learning atmosphere．
At the end of the documentary，all the pupils took part in the same exams in a few subjects．Next is the result．

	Mathematics	Chinese	Science
Chinese style	67.74	46.88	58.33
British style	54.84	36.46	50

Faced with the result，many netizens in Britain made a strong suggestion to their Education Minister that Britain should learn from China and adopt China's educational style．
[写作内容]
假设英国教育部长正在向中国学生征询对上述建议的看法，请你给他写封信表达你的看法．
1．用约 30 个单词完成上文的概要；
2．用约 120 个单词发表你的观点，你应当
（1）阐述你对"英国教育该不该采用中国方式"的看法；
（2  用 2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点．
[写作要求]
1．写作时不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
[评分标准]
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
Dear Minister，
I hear that 
                                                                         ．It is said you are collecting opinions from Chinese students．The following is my view．
                                                               
Yours sincerely
A Chinese senior student．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等 
高分句型一：
I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary，which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones 
我听说你们国家很多人都认为英国的教育制度应遵循中国的英国广播公司的纪录片后，报道一项为期4周的实验结束了与语文教学方法打败英国人． 
高分句型二：
On the other hand，Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health，all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests． 
另一方面，中国学生都患上了严重的睡眠和健康的缺乏，由于对许多考试高分的追求．

解答 Dear Minister，
       I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary，which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones（高分句型一）．  （30字内容概要）
        It is said you are collecting opinions from Chinese students．The following is my view． 
        Personally，I strongly advise you forget Chinese style of education．On one hand，Chinese students wining in test scores is in fact at the cost of their creative abilities and autonomy in learning．As a matter of fact，many of my classmates could do nothing without teachers'and parents'help，let alone make great innovations in their later life．On the other hand，Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health，all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests（高分句型二）．Without a healthy body，nothing is meaningful．Do you really want young Britons to spend 15 to 16 hours a day on study？
       Therefore，dear Minister，you should think twice if you decide to follow that suggestion． （120字发表观点）
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                             A Chinese Senior Student

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．