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17．绿色食品在人们的生活中变得越来越受欢迎，你们班就"人们是否应该吃绿色食品"进行了讨论．请你根据下表内容，写一篇文章，将你们的讨论结果发表在某英文报上．

65%支持吃绿色食品	1．绿色食品种植、生产过程都是在无污染的环境下进行的； 2．绿色食品不含对人体有害的农药．
35%不支持吃绿色食品	1．绿色食品生产成高，价格较高； 2．绿色食品多数大超市出售，购买不是很方便．
你的观点	…

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Should People Eat Green Food？
Recently our class had a discussion about whether people should eat green food．
About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
But 35% of the students think people shouldn't eat green food，since it is much more expensive．What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，people should eat green food if they can afford it．Why would they want to risk making themselves sick？．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果 
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语What's more而且；In my opinion在我看来；risk doing 冒险做某事；Recently our class had a discussion on whether people should eat green food这个句子wheither引导on的宾语从句； Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safe to eat．这个句子making做伴随状语； 
About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）
Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）

解答 Should People Eat Green Food？
      Recently our class had a discussion about whether people should eat green food．
      About 65% of the students believe people should eat green food，since the environment isn't polluted in the process of production．（高分句型一）Also，it is produced without harmful chemicals，making it safer to eat．（高分句型二）
       But 35% of the students think people shouldn't eat green food，since it is much more expensive．What's more，most green food is sold in big supermarkets，making it inconvenient to buy．（高分句型三）
      In my opinion，people should eat green food if they can afford it．Why would they want to risk making themselves sick？

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．