题目内容
【题目】最近一段时间我国多个地方出现雾霾天气,极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。因此你想以此为话题,写一篇通讯稿。应包括以下要点:
1. 对生活造成的影响;2. 建议采取的措施
要求:1. 词数 100 - 120; 2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:雾霾haze 雾霾天气hazy weather
Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China.
【答案】
Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China,which has great harm to our daily life. And it has become a growing concern throughout the country.
It’s obvious that hazy weather has many negative effects. First of all, people’s health is threatened and some of them even suffer from diseases such as coughing. In addition, more traffic jams and more accidents arise from it, which in turn disturbs people’s normal life.
Faced with this situation, we are supposed to raise the awareness of environmental protection. Not only should we stop sending out harmful gases, but more energy should be saved in our daily life. Meanwhile, importance should be attached to planting trees. Only when we take effective measures, will our environment make a difference.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,而且很具体,考生要把要点解释清楚,不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外,还要给出自己的建议,这就要求考生自己拓展发挥,在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】范文中运用些常见的短语First of all首先;suffer from遭受;In addition此外;in turn反过来;In addition, more traffic jams and more accidents arise from it, which in turn disturbs people’s normal life.这个句子中运用which引导非限制性定语从句;Faced with this situation, we are supposed to raise the awareness of environmental protection.这个句子faced做状语用来修饰we;Only when we take effective measures, will our environment make a difference.这个句子only+状语从句+部分倒装 ;
【题目】
Dear Applicant, A We regret to inform you that your application to the stated establishment cannot be processed at this time due to the fact that it does not exist. After consultation with out mythical advisors we have also determined that even if it didn’t exist, the course “wandology” would be highly in demand and hence require at least two As and a B in any of the following subjects: Advanced Spellcrafting Mystimatics Defence Against The Dark Arts History of the Occult Shaft Design Your hand written grade sheet claiming top marks in “waving a stick about”, “ waving a pointy hat” and “watching Paul Daniels TV specials” sadly is not suitable for submission, however by applying through clearing you may be suitable of Liberal Arts courses. Alternatively you may wish to resubmit next year by tying your letter to an owl and hoping for the best. On behalf of UCAS I wish you every success. Yours sincerely, XXX |
Dear Duke University Admissions, B Thank you for your rejection letter of March 26, 2015. After careful consideration, I regret to inform you that I am unable to accept your refusal to offer me admission into the Fall 2015 freshman class at Duke. This year I have been fortunate enough to receive rejection letters from the best and the brightest universities in the country. With a pool of letters so diverse and accomplished I was unable to accept the rejection letters I would have been able to only several years ago. Therefore, I will be attending Duke University's 2015 Class. I look forward to seeing you then. Best, Siobhan O'Dell |
Dear Siobhan, C I understand how disappointed you are that we were unable to offer you a space in our incoming class, I want to be honest with you and let you know that it’s very rare that we learn something that leads us to change our decision, in the last ten years we’ve about 500 requests for a review… and changed the decision four times Wish you all the best~ XXX |
【1】Of the three letters, which is in response to which?
A. A---B B. C---B C. C---A D. B----C
【2】 Chances for Duke University to change its admission decision in history were_______.
A. none B. big C. slim D. hard to tell
【3】 What makes it impossible for the applicant to resubmit an application next year?
A. Tying the letter to an owl and send it to UCAS
B. Printing out grade sheet
C. Applying for the Liberal Arts course as an option
D. Improving his scores
【4】What can we infer form the letter about college application?
A. It is disappointing for sure.
B. Rejection letters are better written than offers.
C. It is no as fun as on imagines.
D. There could be extra work beyond normal procedure.