题目内容
【题目】没有感恩就没有真正的美德( No thanksgiving would be no virtue)。如今社会上一些人缺乏感恩之心,少数人甚至在父母年老体弱时都不愿意赡养。
请结合自己的实际,谈几点父母值得你感恩的地方,以及将来你会做些什么来报答父母的养育之恩。
1.短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
2.100词左右。(感恩: thanksgiving)
Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.
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【答案】Not only do our parents give us life, but also give us endless love , always sharing our happiness and sorrow.
I am very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept me company the whole day. Now I am in senior 3. Luckily my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give enough personal space, which I appreciate so much.
What I should do now is study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.
【解析】试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。根据要点文章可分两段来写,第一段谈几点父母值得你感恩的地方,第二段谈你你将来会做些什么来报答父母的养育之恩。写作时注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅;并注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇英语短文,内容符合要求,句子结构严谨,布局合理,使用高级句子。Not only do our parents give us life, but also give us endless love,使用部分倒装;always sharing our happiness and sorrow.现在分词作伴随状语;they give enough personal space , which I appreciate so much.非限制性定语从句用在句中;另外,Furthermore的运用为文章增色添彩。