题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信,希望得到他的帮助。内容如下:
1.学习热情减退;
2.作业太多,疲于应付;
3.……
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:减退weaken
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【答案】Dear Allen,
How are you? These days I am faced with some problems about my English study, which has confused me long. So I am writing this letter for your advice.
First of all, my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by. More often, I find English so boring that I fall asleep in class. Besides, it seems to have endless homework, and to finish it I have to copy others’. What’s worse, I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject. Is it necessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English.
That’s all. I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题,假定你是李华,最近在英语学习上遇到了一些问题。你给笔友Allen写了一封信,希望得到他的帮助。内容如下:1.学习热情减退;2.作业太多,疲于应付。其次要确定时态,表示现在的状态,所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构,按照题目所给内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合题目所给出的信息,不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式,词数控制在一百左右。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。例如:face with面临,What’s worse更糟糕的是,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。另外这篇短文还使用了一些高级句型。例如These days I am faced with some problems about my English study, which has confused me long.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。