Question

【题目】短文改错

英语课上，老师要求同桌相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出增加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

(注意：格式错误不得分，请在答题卷上作答)

The day before yesterday, I went to the largest bookstore where is near our school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. Under the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave while I found someone trying to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea occurred me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes. As expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】where→which

【2】was→were

【3】Under→With

【4】while→when

【5】去掉but

【6】occurred∧to

【7】purposes→purpose

【8】gives→gave

【9】hear→hearing

【10】him→me

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了作者在书店买书，目睹一个贼偷一个人的钱包，他机智地踩了那个买书人一脚，迫使买书人大叫吓跑贼的故事。

【1】where→which the largest bookstore是先行词，指物，有最高级修饰，定语从句缺少引导词和主语，故把where改为which。

【2】was→were there be句型中be的单复数由后面的主语决定，many people是句子的主语，故把was改为were。

【3】Under→With 固定词组：with the help of在……的帮助下，故把Under改为With。

【4】while→when 固定句式：be about to do sth. when...表示“正在做某事，这时候……”，故把while改为when。

【5】去掉but Although和but不能在同一句中出现，故去掉but。

【6】occurred∧to 固定词组：occur to sb.某人突然想起。故occurred后面加to。

【7】purposes→purpose 固定词组：on purpose故意地，故把purposes改为purpose。

【8】gives→gave 句意：这个男人的尖叫吓了贼一跳。事情发生在过去，故谓语动词应用一般过去时态，故把gives改为gave。

【9】hear→hearing 介词After后面用动名词作宾语，故把hear改为hearing。

【10】him→me 句意：这个人微笑着并表现出对我极大的感激。故把him改为me。

【知识拓展】

固定句式

1.was/were doing sth. when... 正在做某事，这时候……。

2.was/were about to do sth. when...，正要做某事，这时候……。

3.had done sth. when...刚刚做完某事，这时候……。

4.It occurred to sb. that...。某人突然想起……。