题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共1小题)
假如你是李华,你班的留学生Charles即将结束三周的假期从美国返回。你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀,作为生日礼物送给爸爸。请按照以下要求给他写一封电子邮件:
1.品牌:Gillette:
2.价格:30美元左右。
参考词汇:剃须刀shaver
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Charles,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:Dear Charles,I haven’t seen you for over three weeks. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much! But it won’t be long before we meet again, isn’t it?Charles, could you do me a favor, please? My father’s birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world. You can bring it back when you come back, and I will pay you back for that. Thank you very much.Looking forward to your coming soon.Yours,Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇为书信作文,一般开头是问候语。文章李华想让查尔斯带一个剃须刀,要交代清楚剃须刀的品牌和价格。因为是书信,语言不需要太正式。要用简练的语言表达出要点。考生可适当增加细节,使文章内容充实。注意词汇拼写要正确,句式多样化,还要正确使用连接词。使文章通顺连贯。
【亮点说明】文章开头问候了朋友,用了非常简练的语言,使人读起来跟亲切。正文交代了买剃须刀的原因,并明确交代了剃须刀的品牌和大约价位。文章行文流畅,用词准确,句式多样化。