题目内容
【题目】假设你是肇庆市星湖中学的学生李华,你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Mike想来中国旅游,你向他推荐了肇庆市,请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:1. 自我介绍;2. 推荐理由;
注意:1. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可以适当增加细节;3. 词数100左右。
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. ______
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I do hope that you will have a good time in China. Best Wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Zhaoqing.
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinghu Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to travelling in China, Zhaoqing is a popular tourist destination. Zhaoqing is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself to the full degree. Besides, people in Zhaoqing are friendly and willing to help others in need, which will make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Particularly, you can take a chance to experience different cultures and enjoy a variety of delicious snacks in Zhaoqing. By the way, I’d like to serve as your guide if you come.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China. Best wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,作文大纲已给出。成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称;2.时态:以现在时为主;3.文章的内容要点要齐全:(1)自我介绍;(2)推荐理由;4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制,100单词左右。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了定语从句that you put on the English Forum.和where you can enjoy yourself to the full degree.宾语从句that you pay a visit to Zhaoqing.和that you will have a good time in China. 还运用了strongly recommend,places of interests, a variety of等词汇及not only…but also,Besides, Particularly, By the way等连接词。