题目内容
17.根据以下提示,以My Senior High School Life为题写一篇关于你的高中生活的短文.1.我是一名高二学生,今年17岁,逐渐适应了高中生活;
2.高中生活很繁忙,学习任务重,偶尔感到劳累;
3.学习上有压力,但从来没有放弃追求梦想;
4.学校的课外生活丰富多彩.
注意:
1、词数:不少于100词;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
My Senior High School Life.
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分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,以My Senior High School Life为题写一篇关于你的高中生活的短文.1.我是一名高二学生,今年17岁,逐渐适应了高中生活;2.高中生活很繁忙,学习任务重,偶尔感到劳累;3.学习上有压力,但从来没有放弃追求梦想;4.学校的课外生活丰富多彩.写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.
重点词汇:adjust…to…(调整…以适应…);be different from (不同于);in comparison(相比之下,比较起来); lack of (缺乏);In spite of (尽管、虽然);give up (放弃); make efforts to (努力做);involve in (卷入)
高分句型:1.①In spite of the stress in learning,②never have I given up my dream.
①in spite of是介词短语,表示"尽管"、"虽然"、"不顾"之意;②副词never位于句首,句子用倒装.
2.Determined to enter a key university,I have been making efforts to improve myself.
分词短语 Determined to enter a key university 在句中作状语.
解答 My Senior High School Life
I am a 17-year-old high school junior.At first,I didn't adjust myself well to the senior high school life.Obviously,it is quite different from junior high school life.In comparison,senior high school is more challenging.As a consequence,I will occassionally get tired from overwork and lack of sleep.In spite of the stress in learning,never have I given up my dream(高分句型一).Determined to enter a key university,I have been making efforts to improve myself(高分句型二).Moreover,senior high school life can be colorful as well.There are a variety of afterschool activities,I always involve myself in them actively.All in all,I gradually enjoy this new life.
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全,关键短语和句型要写对,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,还要注意人称和时态使用要正确.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,合理安排写作结构,平时注意积累词汇及语法知识.