题目内容
8.假设你是李华,你在澳大利亚的笔友 Bill 的生日即将到来,请你给他写一封电子邮件,表示祝贺.邮件要包括以下要点:1.祝他生日晚会上玩得愉快;2.介绍你班上周日的爬山活动,并附上几张照片;
3.询问 Bill 的近况及大学专业的选择.
注意:内容包括所有要点,但不要逐条翻译;可适当发挥,使行文连贯;词数100左右.
Dear Bill,
Happy birthday!
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给生日即将到来的澳大利亚的笔友 Bill 写一封电子邮件,表示祝贺,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般将来时,内容要点包括:祝他生日晚会上玩得愉快;介绍你班上周日的爬山活动,并附上几张照片;询问 Bill 的近况及大学专业的选择.我们此篇作文分为三部分,第一部分为生日祝福.第二部分为介绍班级上周日的爬山活动.第三部分为询问 Bill 的近况及大学专业的选择.
重点短语与句型:
have a wonderful time 玩的愉快
What's more而且,此外
be attached to附上,贴上
major in主修
高分句型一:Last Sunday my class went to climb a mountain in the suburbs of Wuhan,where we had a wonderful time and enjoyed a relaxing spring day.此句用了where 引导定语从句
高分句型二:Some photos taken that day will be attached to this email and please share my happiness.此句用了过去分词taken作后置定语
解答 Dear Bill,
Happy birthday!I hope you'll have a great birthday party and wish you all the best.(生日祝福)
Last Sunday my class went to climb a mountain in the suburbs of Wuhan,where we had a wonderful time and enjoyed a relaxing spring day(高分句型一).It was really a great comfort for us to have a rest from the heavy school work.What's more,the activity also promoted the friendship among our classmates.Some photos taken that day will be attached to this email and please share my happiness(高分句型二)(介绍班级上周日的爬山活动)
How are things going with you,Bill?You'll start your university life this year.Have you decided what you'll major in at university?Please keep me updated on anything important with you.(询问 Bill 的近况及大学专业的选择)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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.We really feel grateful for your assistance.( )
A. | Every little helps | |
B. | The more,the better | |
C. | It's better to give than to receive | |
D. | The best things come in small packages |
Made by Chen Xiaoqing,an awardwinning documentary maker,China at Your Tongue Tips is filled with varieties of food,which tells us the beautiful process of foodmaking.The program is sure to attract both food experts and ordinary audiences.
Television is filled with food programs these days,especially introductions of top chefs and close looks at the complicated and refined (精制的) cooking processes of a feast (盛宴),but how to create dishes is only one aspect of food culture,according to Chen.
"The program tries to bring something new by presenting more cultural elements related to dishes,like eating habits of eating."
The surprise is that the show is not only about dishes.Every part focuses on different people,who tell stories about their adventures with food.
"As a saying goes,‘You are what you eat.'"Chen says."Food is always connected with people.Behind the documentary,they are stories that reflect people's living situations and attitudes.That's another section which makes it special."
To get enough good stories,the production team spent three months doing researches and interviews in about 60cities before they started shooting in last July.Filming lasted about nine months.
China at Your Tongue Tips shows social changes while presenting food culture,such as showing the elderly are in their hometowns while other members of this family work outside.In those cases,food serves as reminders of happy times and centerpieces of reunions.
Title:A Hit about Chinese Food
(71)Introduction | ●The program consists of seven parts. ●It shows Chinese food in terms of history,culture as well as (72)geography |
Characteristics of China at Your Tongue Tips | ●Experts and ordinary people are (73)attracted by the program(74)full of delicious food. ●(75)Cultural elements are presented to bring something new. ●Every part draws our (76)attention to persons who tell stories about their adventure with food. ●Stories can(77)reflect people's living situations and attitudes. |
Background and significance of the program | ●It took the production team 3months to go to about 60cities to do(78)research and interviews before shooting. ●(79)Filming lasted more than nine months. ●The program shows social (80)changes. |