题目内容
6.Rilla 将她的烦恼写在了博客上并征求大家的建议.假如你是吉林的李丹,请了解她的烦恼,根据以下提示写出你的建议,要求100词左右,建议的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数.要点提示:
1.孩子应尊重父母;
2.父母经验丰富;
3.父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的.
4.多同父母交流沟通;
5.…
词语提示:respect v.﹠n.尊重
responsible adj.有责任感的
demand v.﹠n.要求
Here is Rilla's problem on the Blog:
My problem is my parents.They never stop going on about (唠叨) how I should keep my room clean,keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes.They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night!None of my friends have got such terrible parents.What should I do?
Rilla,the USA
Hi,Rilla.I think you are lucky to have such good parents.
Li Dan,Jilin.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们就Rilla 的烦恼给她提一些建议.这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:孩子应尊重父母;父母经验丰富;父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的.多同父母交流沟通;我们此篇作文分为两部分,第一部分为父母值得我们敬重的原因.第二部分为青少年自身应该做好哪些方面.
重点短语与句型:
be of great help对…有益,有帮助
be responsible for 对…负责
look like看上去像
高分句型一:You should understand and respect them,doing what they ask you to do.此句用了现在分词doing 作伴随状语.
高分句型二:So you should do what you can do,such as keep your room clean and doing the washing-up.此句what引导宾语从句.
解答 Hi,Rilla.I think you are lucky to have such good parents.You should understand and respect them,doing what they ask you to do(高分句型一).They have rich experience and better advice for young people.As your parents,they surely hope you become an excellent person.Their demands are of great help for your growing up.(父母值得我们敬重的原因)
Every member should be responsible for ourselves and do something for the family.So you should do what you can do,such as keep your room clean and doing the washing-up(高分句型二).Remember:learning by doing.You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes.Teenagers should look like teenagers.Anyway,if you have any problems,just talk with your parents.(青少年自身应该做好哪些方面)
Li Dan,Jilin
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
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