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2．假定你叫李华，是我校高二（2）班的学生．你在校报英语专栏看到了学校"英语文化节"的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据 写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件．
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival，which will be held on January 20，2016，is now looking for 20student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate．If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at  chenlaoshi@aef．com．
写作要点：1．表明意图；2．陈述应征目的；3．说明应征条件（性格、能力等）．
写作要求：1．词数：120词左右；2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
Dear Ms Chen，
I'm a student from Class 2，Grade 2．
               ．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封应征邮件．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容主要包括：一表明意图；二陈述应征目的；三说明应征条件；四再次表明决心．
高分句型：
1．I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because（because引导原因状语从句），by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as （as well as 表示"也包括"）my confidence in speaking English in public．
我真的想要获得这个宝贵的机会，因为，通过提供我的服务，我将能够提高我的组织能力，交际能力以及在公共场合用英语说话的自信．
2．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which （which引导定语从句，代指主句）have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．
我成功地帮助老师组织了几个课上活动，获得了老师和同学的称赞．

解答 Dear Ms Chen，
I'm，a student from Class 2，Grade 2． I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．（表明意图）
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．【高分句型一】（陈述应征目的）
As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．【高分句型二】（说明应征条件）
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I would appreciate it you could take me into consideration．（再次表明决心）
Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua

点评 这是一封应征信．
用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花．