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11.高中生活刚刚开始,你对高中生活应该充满了憧憬与梦想.请你以My idealhigh school life(我理想中的高中生活)为话题写一篇120词左右的短文,从生活、交友、学习等多方面谈谈你对自己高中生活的规划.
My ideal high school life.
                                                            

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
There's a saying"Three heads are better than one",so I'm going to work together with my real good friends I'll make.
俗话说"三个臭皮匠胜过一个诸葛亮",所以我要同我的真正的好朋友一起工作.
高分句型二:
On the other hand,with the help of parents and teachers I'll study hard in order to realize my dream and their greatest hope as well.
另一方面,借助家长和老师,我会为了实现我的梦想,实现他们的希望努力学习.

解答 High school life has just started.Everything seems new to me.But I know it's a very important period of time.I plan to do the followings to make my high school life colorful and fruitful.
There's a saying"Three heads are better than one",so I'm going to work together with my real good friends I'll make(高分句型一).I believe friendship can help me get over any difficulty I might face in the future and true friends will be eternal treasure of my life; Meanwhile I'll take an active part in sports activities.Only in this way can I put more time and energy into study.On the other hand,with the help of parents and teachers I'll study hard in order to realize my dream and their greatest hope as well(高分句型二).
Difficulties and happiness go hand in hand.I'll try my best to make my high school life worthwhile.

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.

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