题目内容

7.你的朋友李华最近染上了网瘾(Internet addiction),导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、与家人朋友产生矛盾等问题.请你给他写一篇英文书信,告诉他网瘾的危害并提出一些意见.
要求:1.语言通顺连贯,可以适当增加情节.
2.120词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Li Hua,
I am glad to hear from you yesterday
                                                                .

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
 However,our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it.I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.
然而,我们的生活将是如果我们沉迷于它极大的影响.我感到担心,知道你已经浪费了很多宝贵的时间玩网络游戏.
高分句型二:
It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise.
这是一个好主意你读多一些有意义的书,做一些体育锻炼.

解答 Dear Li Hua,
I am glad to hear from you yesterday.As your close friend,I'd like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you.
As we know,the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills.However,our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it.I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games(高分句型一).Now your grades are going down and your health is going from bad to worse.To make things worse,it has damaged the relationship with your friends and family.So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit.It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercise(高分句型二).Good luck!
I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon.
Yours truly,

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.

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