Question

【题目】假定你是李华，近日你校将举行三苏文化节系列活动。请给你的留学生朋友Jack写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：

1. 活动时间及地点；

2. 活动目的及内容。

注意： 1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：三苏文化节 Three Sus Culture Festival 书法 calligraphy

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

To honor three great literary figures in Chinese history, our school is to hold Three Sus Culture Festival. Since you’re fascinated by Chinese culture and literature, I’m writing to invite you to join.

The festival is scheduled for July 16 to 18, when various activities will be arranged in our school hall and playground. With the aim to help us better understand. Three Sus culture and thus develop a deeper love for our hometown, the festival will include plays based on Three Sus’ life stories, exhibition of their calligraphy and lectures on their poetry.

I do believe this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生朋友Jack写封邮件邀请他参加三苏文化节系列活动。

第一步: 审题

体裁: 应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构: 总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.活动时间及地点；

2. 活动目的及内容。

第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)

aim to；invite to；base on；a good opportunity for

第三步: 连词成句

To honor three great literary figures in Chinese history, our school is to hold Three Sus Culture Festival.

Since you’re fascinated by Chinese culture and literature, I’m writing to invite you to join.

The festival is scheduled for July 16 to 18, when various activities will be arranged in our school hall and playground.

Three Sus culture and thus develop a deeper love for our hometown, the festival will include plays based on Three Sus’ life stories, exhibition of their calligraphy and lectures on their poetry.

I do believe this is a good opportunity for you to explore more of Chinese culture.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步: 润色修改