Question

书面表达（满分20分）

假如你叫李华，是育才中学一名高一学生。国际友谊俱乐部根据你提出的要求，把美国朋友Kate介绍给你做笔友。现在请你用英文写一封信给Kate，表达愿意与他交友的愿望，并提供自己的有关信息（如下表所示），同时询问对方学习、生活和家庭方面的情况。

姓名	李华	年龄	17
性格	乐观、随和	就读学校	育才中学
就读年级	高一	学习状况	辛苦、快乐
家庭成员	父亲，教师；母亲，家庭主妇；妹妹，学生
家庭住址	一个有山有水的小村子	业余爱好	听音乐、唱歌、跳舞、看电影

注意：词数100左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数)

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Answer 1

Dear Kate,

I’m very glad to have the chance to be your pen friend. You were introduced to me by International Friendship Club because I wanted to have a pen friend in your country. I hope we will be good friends forever.

My name is Li Hua and I am seventeen years old. I’m a Senior Grade 1 student of Ningxia Yucai school. In our school, all the students study hard and feel very happy. In my spare time, I like lisening to music, singing, dancing and watching movies. I’m optimistic and easy-going. I have a happy family and there are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my younger sister and me. My father is a teacher; my mother is a housewife and my younger sister is a student. We live in a small but beautiful village with clean rivers and green mountains around it.

Dear Kate, can you tell me something about your life and study, and your family? I’m really interested in it.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求给Kate写一封信，表达愿意和他交友的愿望，并告知自己的有关信息，并询问Kate的学习、生活、家庭等方面的情况。注意书信的格式，不能出现标点和拼写错误；作文要包含表格内的所有信息，注意句子的连贯性。

亮点说明：have the chance to

范文使用了原因状语从句because I wanted to have a pen friend；宾语从句I hope we will be good friends forever；with复合结构with clean rivers and green mountains around it等，有较好的语法基础；

范文注意使用In our school, In my spare time, and, but等衔接句子，使作文语意连贯、结构紧凑；

范文使用了很多固定短语study hard, lisening to, be interested in, look forward to, hear from等，使作文的内容得到了充实。

考点：书信类作文