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4．假如你是李华，高中毕业后想到美国弗吉尼亚大学（University of Virginia ）计算机专业深造．请根据以下要点用英语写一封入学申请．
1．个人情况；
2．学习情及特长；
3．申请入学的理由；
注意：
1．词数100 左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
First，please allow me to briefly introduce myself．This coming June，I'll graduate from Xinhua High School．I'm an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects，in particular the computer，and English．That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USAand enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）It would be a great honor for me to study at your university．I'd appreciate it very much if I could receive your reply!
Sinceely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，高中毕业后想到美国弗吉尼亚大学（University of Virginia ）计算机专业深造．请根据以下要点用英语写一封入学申请，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：个人情况；学习情及特长；申请入学的理由；2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：graduate from 从…毕业；an all-round student 全面发展的学生；in particular尤其，特别；all around the world世界范围内
I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
  I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
        First，please allow me to briefly introduce myself．This coming June，I'll graduate from Xinhua High School．I'm an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects，in particular the computer，and English．That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
        I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）It would be a great honor for me to study at your university．I'd appreciate it very much if I could receive your reply!
                                                                                                Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．