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17．假定你是李华，你所在的城市将要举办2017年金砖会议，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员．请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信．内容应包括：
1．爱好英语，口语熟练，经常与外国网友聊天；
2．性格开朗，思维敏捷，善于交流；
3．本地人，熟悉城市的历史与文化；
4．个人表态（真诚服务、保证满意）并希望获准．
注意：
1．词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：2017金砖会议 2017BRICS Conference，网友 net-pal
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2017BRICS Conference．As a senior high school student，I'm crazy about English and practice speaking English in everyday life．For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）Above all，being a native of the city，I do know a lot about its history and cultur e．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my sincere service and enjoy their stay in our city．I would appreciate it if my application could be granted．And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你所在的城市将要举办2017年金砖会议，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员．请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：爱好英语，口语熟练，经常与外国网友聊天；性格开朗，思维敏捷，善于交流；本地人，熟悉城市的历史与文化；个人表态（真诚服务、保证满意）并希望获准．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be crazy about 对…着迷；For example例如；chat with与…交谈；contributes to有助于；Besides另外；Above all最重要的是；spare no effort to不遗余力地去做；
For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）
Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）
And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
      My name is Li Hua．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2017 BRICs Conference．
      As a senior high school student，I'm crazy about English and practice speaking English in everyday life．For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）Above all，being a native of the city，I do know a lot about its history and cultur e．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my sincere service and enjoy their stay in our city．I would appreciate it if my application could be granted．And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours Sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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